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摘要:下文是一篇奥运会有点关系的英语作文,虽然奥运会已经结束了,好学英文网在此同样给大家分享出来,附带了好学英文网特聘翻译刘志宏翻译此文,希望您参考范文及翻译以及点评来学习此文。 【习作要求】 根据中文意思和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段。所给…

下文是一篇奥运会有点关系的英语作文,虽然奥运会已经结束了,好学英文网在此同样给大家分享出来,附带了好学英文网特聘翻译刘志宏翻译此文,希望您参考范文及翻译以及点评来学习此文。
【习作要求】

根据中文意思和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段。所给的英文提示词语必须都用上,句数不限;中文提示内容不必逐句翻译。

一个雨天,李莉乘出租车回家。在车里她发现司机在学英语。他对李莉说了些什么? 此事对你学习英语有何启发? 为支持北京奥运你打算做些什么?

(1) one rainy day, go home, by taxi

(2) in the car, find, was learning English

(3) said to Li Li, I, weak, English, when at school, now work hard, to help with the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games

(4) I think... to show support (n.支持)for the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games

【参考范文】

One rainy day, Li Li went home by taxi. In the car she found (that) the driver was learning English. He said to Li Li: "I was weak in English when I was at school. Now I'm working hard at it to help with the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games."
一个雨天,莉莉打车回家。在车上她发现司机在学英语。他对莉莉说:“在学校的时候,英语是我的弱项。现在我努力学英语,以此来为2008奥运会加油(为2008奥运会尽一份自己的力量)。”
I think I should learn from the driver. English is very important to us because it is widely used all over the world. As a student, I'll do my best to learn English well at school. And I'm going to speak English as much as possible to show support for the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games.
我想,我应该象那位司机学习。英语对我们来说是一门非常重要的语言,因为她是世界上使用范围最广泛的一门语言(国际语言)。作为一名学生,我在学校将努力学习好英语。我也要努力练习的去讲英语,为2008北京奥运会助威。

【名师点评】

第一句很重要,以便确定全文时态。句与句之间要连贯。关键句要用上,如:I'm going to speak English as much as possible to show support for the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games.

(1) 格式:简介;

(2) 人称:第三人称;

(3) 时态:一般现在时,一般过去时,一般将来时;

(4) 短语、句式、句型:短语与句式已给出,句型包括简单句、直接引语、宾语从句。
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