文章细节:JOOZONE 发表时间:13-06-13 22:26
作文题目:
初中将要结束,你有没有什么想要记录下来呢?你的好朋友?你和好朋友之间发生的事?
作文提示:
Who is your best classmate?
what makes you get on well with her/him?
What is the happiest thing between you and her?
作文:
I have studied in my school for 3 years .I get on well with my classmates .And my best classmate is Lu Jie.Lu is my classmate .She always help me with my English. So, I got good grades in the last year. English makes me get on well with her.One day, She invited me to her birthday party. We sang song and danced at the party. We ate a birthday cake. The cake is delicious. We had a good time.How time flies. We will go to high school. No matter how. Lu Jie is my best friend.
老师能不能把它修改得更像满分作文一点?