My Mother

　　My mother is a housewife. She is very busy every day. She get to(3) up very early every morning. She gets up at about five thirty. After that she begins to cook for the family.

　　Before breakfast, she does some housework. After breakfast, she sends our children (4) to school. She always tells us study hard (5). She has not many (6) money, but she often buys us some nice clothes and school things.

　　My mother goes to bed very late every night. She always has a lot of work to be done. (7)

　　My mother is hard-working. I love her very much.

（2）hair是不可数名词，不能用复数形式。

（3）改为gets。主语是第三人称单数时，动词也应变为相应的三单形式。

（4）此处“我们孩子”是同位词组，“我们”与“孩子”之间是同位关系，应将其改成：us children。

（5）这里应使用动词不定式，即tell us to do something。

（6）money 为不可数名词，前面应用much修饰，而不能用many。

（7）这里的动词不定式to do的逻辑主语是she，它们之间是主动关系，所以动词不定式应用主动形式。