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摘要:Joozone Note:好学英文网重点推荐,how is your generation different from your parents'generation?作文批改。作者我们这一代和父辈们的不同之处在哪里?的英文版原文见下页:点击查看 批改方案一…

Each generation has its own characteristics that are superior, and if parents and children can communicate more and learn from each other, tomorrow will be better

总体评价:开头形式很不错,而且注意到与后面的论点相照应。
虽说某些区别有点普遍化,但我们改一改,比如说清楚we like…,our parents like…more,也还算合理的。

作者的英文版原文见下页:点击查看
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