Income Gap. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 有些人认为收入差距的存在是合理的;
2. 有些人认为收入差距的存在是不合理的
3. 收入差距对社会的影响
●审题概述●?
议论文,根据题目要求文章可分为三点:收入差距的合理性;收入差距的不合理
性;对社会的影响。
在叙述第一、二点时,可适当地的展开一两个小点。注意各点之间的衔接,以及论证的逻辑。
● 范文●?
Income Gap
○1There has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap now. Some people hold that the gap is natural because it ○2reflects different contributions that different people make in their work. ○3In their view, those people with high income work hard and long. Besides, these people bring high ○4efficiency, and create more wealth. Accordingly, they deserve high pay.
○1On the other hand, there are always some people who view this gap negatively. They believe that a lot of crimes happen as a result of this income gap. Some people make so little from their work that they ○2risk taking criminal acts to get rich. In fact, experts have long found out that most cases of crime are directly related to low income. There is ○3another point to ○4back up a negative view against income gap. For most people, income gap may destroy the satisfaction
that they obtain from work.
○1As anything has two sides, so has the problem of income gap. Personally, I believe that this gap may ○2motivate people to compete better in job market. When this gap is growing too
wide, however, our government should make some policies to ○3get rid of its negative consequences.
◇第一段思路点评:
收入差距的合理性
◇语言点提示:
○1 There has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap: 直接点题
○2 reflect 意为“反映”
○3 in one’s view 意为“在某人看来”(分析观点时常用词组)
○4 efficiency 意为“效率”
◇第二段思路点评:
收入差距的不合理性
◇语言点提示
○1On the other hand:意为“另一点、另一方面”(提出相反观点,与上文衔接)
○2risk doing something 意为“冒险做某事”
○3another point: 提出另一小点
○4back up 意为“支持”
◇第三段思路点评:
收入差距的影响
◇语言点提示
○1As anything has two sides, so…... 议论文常用句式
○2motivate:意为“激励,刺激”
○3get rid of:意为“摆脱,除去”
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