英语作文:大学生就业问题之我见
My View on University Students’Employment

1． 目前对于大学生来说就业仍是最大的问题，有人认为是大学生人数太多，有人认为是大学生能力差，……

2． 你对此有什么看法？

【范文】

Nowadays, the employment of college students is still the main concern since many of them cannot find jobs. When looking to the reasons, some agree it is due to the increasing enrollment of universities, some think the degradation of ability accounts, while others believe it should blame governments for not offering enough occupations.

The following factors can account for this problem. First and foremost, college students hold wrong attitudes towards jobs and set their job objectives at unreasonable levels. Furthermore, college students fail to realize their own defects and to make further self-improvements. Last but by no means the least, the courses offered by colleges cannot meet the requirements of economic development. What’s more, related departments have not provided more trainings and internship opportunities, which benefit students a lot before they enter into the society.

All in all, only through the combined efforts of related ones can college students find satisfactory jobs.

【网友点评】

文章第一段指出目前大学生就业难的现象，提及不同的人对待此事的看法。文章第二段引出自己对此事的看法，最后一段总结全文。

在第二段陈述自己的观点时，作者分别从学生，学校及政府部分的角度着手分析，大学生对待工作期望值过高并且没有认清自身的缺点；学校课程设置跟不上经济发展的要求；政府部门未提供足够多的培训实习机会。

第一段中increasing enrollment表示“扩招”；第二段中列举原因分别用First and foremost表示“首先”，Furthermore表示“其次”，Last but by no means the least表示“最后但并非最不重要”。第三段中only…can为倒装句，表示“只有……才能”。