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摘要:初中和高中的差别 中学生活和高中生活(the difference between junior high and senior high middle school) 我们提供给您两篇作文:分别是我的高中生活;我的初中生活,希望您参考一下…

初中和高中的差别 中学生活和高中生活~~~(the difference between junior high and senior high middle school) 我们提供给您两篇作文:分别是我的高中生活;我的初中生活,希望您参考一下:

回忆高中生活(High school memories)

Oh..I miss my high school again...Those good old days and those hard old days... I didn’t like it when I was studying there...I think all Chinese who experienced high school would have the same feeling... How hard and stressful the days in high school are!

Everyday I got up at no later than 6:00, and then I dug into study with fever pitch. From time to time, I fear once I lay off, I would lag behind. We slept at mid-night after all day’s study. Every day I try to push 110% of myself into the grueling study. I took a short nap at noon and then,immediately after that, another period of hard, hard study began. Every day, it just seemed that the classroom, the school canteen, and the dorm were our only hang around... There was no one single minute that our nerves were relaxed. The once-per-month big exam was on the point of killing us. So every day we were preparing for exams. It was all no exaggeration to say that we were not given one second to take a deep breath.

How hard life was! ah...But ridiculous. I didn’t even lose 1 kg even if life was that hard to me... Sometimes, I just hoped that the college entrance examination test would fall earlier, so that I could be free from all pain. And I didn’t want to care about the result. Good or bad, I truly didn’t care. I just need freedom and relaxation. Life was killing me at that time...

Just after I took the college examination, which was on the afternoon of June 10, 2004, maybe exactly at 11:00, I was elated..I never felt this elated before!!!! At that time, I felt like I am a free girl after being shackled for 1000 years!

At that time, we both screamed out loud!!! We need the hard scream to give vent to all of our pent-up emotions for a few years! All the years of hard study was in preparation of the 2.5 days’ exam. When we came back to the dorm, we just had the strong impulsion to tear apart all books, so that we could feel better. Actually, I was on the point of doing that. But later, I withdrew. I loved books. They were my memories of those tough days.

3 years! How fantastic!!! It has been 3 years since I graduated from high school! How incredible!!! All the years, I have been appreciative of all the poeple I met, and of the achievement I obtained, though not much. I felt like as a person, I was becoming better day by day. I have been learning from every one and every possible channel. And over the past one year, I learned most. I felt so good at it... and I have been so happy...

I am going home this morning. But my best high school friend had something to do. Then we are delaying our schedule. I am eager to come back to my high school and take more pictures of it. Though it has been firmly in my heart, I am still eager to see it more, the same as I am eager to...see....*** more...

Oh..I got the call..I sould leave for home...Good Good Vacation to all!

如何读过高中生活

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Dear friends, Welcome to our school.Now vocation is over.You have become a high school student. Meanwhile,you will start a new life.As a senior three student,I will share my feelings and ideas about high school life in the following. As we all know,the study of high school is important for our life,we should focus our attention on studying .However,it’s an important thing to solve the problem about studying and amateur activities.At the same time,we also should learn to face the pressure from parents and society.If we fully take advantage of the time in class,we will have time to have a rest.Faced with the parents expection,we should make it as motivation. As far as I’m concerned,aas a senior student,we should have our own ideas.What’s more,we had better adapt to the life of high schol as soon as possible.I hope all of us can be admitted to the unversity. Thank you. 

批改: 

1本篇文章的靓点:

 1)作者对于高中生活感悟很好,有益于高一新生快速适应高中生活。

 2)本文用了很多好的短语和句式:Meanwhile; As a senior three student,I will share my feelings and ideas about high school life in the following.; As we all know,; focus our attention on; .However; it’s an important thing to solve…; At the same time,; If we fully take advantage of the time;Faced with;As far as I’m concerned…; What’s more; be admitted to等很好的句式、短语和非谓语动词。 

2本文需要改进的地方: 

全文有在电脑打字时的错误拼写,而且个别词语用法不是很规范。 

1) 第一段Now vocation is over.应当改为Now summer vocation is over 

2) 第二段As we all know,the study of high school is important for our life,we should focus our attention on studying .应当加上连词:As we all know,the study of high school is important for our life,therefore we should focus our attention on studying.

3) Faced with the parents expection,we should make it as motivation.应当改为:Faced with the parents’ expectation,we should consider it as motivation. 

4) As far as I’m concerned, a senior student, aas应当改为:as。

5) What’s more,we had better adapt to the life of high schol as soon as possible. adapt to中的用法不是很明确,应当改为“adapt ourselves to”。 

评语:本文字数符合高考要求(148词)。全文行文流畅,要点全面,叙述明了,是一篇很好的作文。作为一名高三生,能写出如此好的美文,确实显现了作者的文笔功底,是一个不可多得的人才。