考研英语作文批改点评如下：

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a sincere reader of your magazine and I especially like your column of the Movie Review. I therefore plan to place an order of your magazine for one year. I would be grateful if you are so kind as to render me with the following information.

Firstly, I wonder whether it is more（more不修饰比较级）cheaper to order the magazine on an annual basis than on usual? and（And）how much are the fees I should pay for? Secondly, I also need to learn the situation recruiting VIP mumbers（拼写错误） of your magazine club. Thirdly, I want to kown（拼写错误）the ways of deliverity（拼写错误）:（英语中用逗号） by EMS or by other express deliverity（拼写错误）?

Looking forward to hear form（拼写错误，from） you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

点评：7分

字数有点超。要注意单词的拼写。整体还是不错的。

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