好学英文网:英语作文阅读资源分享平台!
标签:考研  来源:互联网  作者:本站整理  发布时间:2012-07-20  ★★★加入收藏〗〖手机版
摘要:新东方考研英语待批改作文: Dear Sir or Madam, I received your invitation. It is really appreciative that I can get an interview opportunity of …
新东方考研英语待批改作文:

Dear Sir or Madam,
I received your invitation. It is really appreciative that I can get an interview opportunity of English teacher. To apply this position, I prepared some resources and met some questions. If you are kind enough could you tell me the answers?
Firstly, since I still have some classes, whether it can be a part-time job. Moreover, I organized resume in Chinese. Should I make an English one? Finally, because becoming an English teacher is my dream, if I do not reach your English teacher standard, could I get an assistant first?
Thanks for your time and I am looking forward to you.

Sincerely yours,
Li Ming

考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Sir or Madam,

I received your invitation. It is really appreciative that I can get an interview opportunity of English teacher. To apply this position, I prepared some resources and met some questions. If you are(这里是陈述语气,结尾用的问号) kind enough could you tell me the answers?

Firstly, since I still have some classes, whether it can be a part-time job. Moreover, I organized resume in Chinese. Should I make an English one?(这一句表达的不太好) Finally, because becoming an English teacher is my dream, if I do not reach your English teacher standard, could I get an assistant first? << Thanks for your time and I am looking forward to you.

Sincerely yours,
Li Ming

点评:7-8

写的不错,目的明确,问题清楚。

好学英文网