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Dear Mr Annan:

I’m very glad to write to you. I’m a common college student in China. I think that there is a good chance to tell my images about the world peace to you.

At present ,world are quickly developing not only in Asia,Europe,Amcrican but also in Afican.But as histroic and particuraly reason,there are many unpeaceful places in the world.Such as Araqi and Afican.

there are also in the war.I think most people in the world like the peace ,but why too many countries are unpeaceful?In my opinon, we needn’t take care of the reanson cause to wars.we should need UN to help these countries to escape from wars.

As its famous,UN should be as a authority at preventing the war and keeping peace.UN should announce to the world our determine against the war!We must have a faith:UN is a big family,all the states on the Earth are brothers,no matter develeping countries and develeped cuntries,no matter poor man and rich man,we can’t choose nationalitys,peoples and hometowns,but we can choose the peace .If all the people follow this faith,a new world will apper in the furture.And UN is a really globe viilage at that time!

yours Eric

Mar 12 2004

错误：

1.I’m a common college student in China. / I’m an average college student in China.

2.I think that there is a good chance to tell my images about the world peace to you./ I think this is a good chance to tell my opinions about……..

3.world are quickly developing not only in Asia,Europe,Amcrican but also in Afican / the world is developing quickly not only in Asia, Europe, America but also in Africa.

4.But as histroic and particuraly reason,there are many unpeaceful places in the world.Such as Araqi and Afica / But for historical and some particular reasons, there are many unpeaceful places in the world, such as Iraq and some African countries.

5.As its famous,UN should be as a authority at preventing / As a famous organization, the Un should be an authority on preventing

6.,no matter poor man and rich man / no matter poor men or rich men

7.apper / appear

8.globe viilage / global village

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